Reflection and Evaluation
In reflecting on my blogs, I know that my thesis statement needs improvement, maybe a little more evidence in my paragraphs. I plan on working a little harder, writing more longer essays with specific details, especially if I want to do better on my CAT-W test, which was the only thing we did using paper and ink. I have to be able to better myself at proof-reading before submitting my work. I have a major problem in finding 400 word per essay, I prefer reading a story than writing a story, my ideas and thoughts does not flow enough to make long flowing sentences. Writing an essay takes a lot of time and concentration, it takes practice, reading, thinking and revising. I admire someone who can just sit and write a 500 word essay without breaking a sweat. A good writer would capture the reader's attention, and make the reader want to read on, and lets the reader know what to expect in the essay. I also learned to use the Thesaurus and the writers handbook. I enjoyed playing Freerice Grammer game, and also the other games on the internet, the memory or brain game, the math game, the speed game. I liked the movies that was seen throughout this class, I think they were all interesting but connected in some way or the other. Technology played a major part in this class, most of the class work was done on the computer, I enjoyed the challenge and look foward to more. It was nice to read my classmates comments about my blog, they were all acknowledge. Overall, I think I am comforatable where I am in class, I can perform the task efficiently.
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